起点小说《放开那个女巫》goodreads书评，评分4.2（满分5分）

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译文简介

程岩原以为穿越到了欧洲中世纪，成为了一位光荣的王子。但这世界似乎跟自己想的不太一样？女巫真实存在，而且还真具有魔力？女巫种田文，将种田进行到底。

正文翻译

Cheng Yan traveled through time only to end up in Europe of the medi period, becoming Roland, a Royal Prince. But this world doesn’t seem to be the same as his former world. Witches are real and they really can use magic?
Follow Roland’s battle for the throne against his siblings. Will he be able to win, even though the king already declared him to be a hopeless case and with the worst starting situation? With his experiences of modern technologies and the help of the witches who are known as devils’ servants and hunted by the the Holy Church he might have a fighting chance.
Now, let his journey begin.

程岩原以为穿越到了欧洲中世纪，成为了一位光荣的王子。但这世界似乎跟自己想的不太一样？女巫真实存在，而且还真具有魔力？
女巫种田文，将种田进行到底。

评论翻译

Aki 5星

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Shelves: action, fantasy, historical-fiction, military, steampunk, webnovel
Probably one of the only webnovels where the male MC is not only surronded by a lot of beautiful women but they are even proper characters with their own full personality and even more astonishing so not his harem. Wonderfully refreshing. Mostly because I despise harem stuff and am sick of it appearing in more than half of the good chinese series I read. Well done author. Characters, plot and it's twists are all very satisfying

标签：动作、奇幻、历史小说、军事、蒸汽朋克、网络小说
一部绝无仅有的网络小说，男主角虽然被许多美女包围，但是她们都是具有自己完整个性的适当角色。精彩的不是主角的后宫。令人耳目一新。主要是因为我鄙视后宫类小说，并且厌倦了它出现在我读过的一半以上的还不错的中文网文里。好样的作者。人物、情节和曲折都非常令人满意
Annemarie 3星

This was my first webnovel and my second chinese book. Like the previous one, there were some weird sentences and translations, but way less than in the other book I read. The concept of this story was great, it reminded me a bit of Crusade in Jeans. But with added fantasy in the form of witches. it was also a lot less believable, with the amount of technological advances this person thought up. There was some weird anti-western sentiment at times. (Like a mediaval general? looking at him using chopsticks and commenting they seemed way more useful than knife and fork) I've never met anyone who thought that the first time they saw/tried chopsticks. There are certainly advantages to chopsticks, but the same can be said for knife and fork. The budding romance thing is weird, with how young the girls are compared to the prince who is (was?) about 40 in the modern world. creepy

这是我的第一本网络小说，也是我的第二本中文书。和上一本一样，有一些奇怪的句子和翻译，但比我读的另一本书要少得多。这个故事的概念很棒，它让我想起了十字军东征。但是以女巫的形式增加了幻想。考虑到男主角取得的技术进步的数量，这也不太可信。有时会有一些奇怪的反西方情绪。（就像一个中世纪的将军？看着他用筷子并评论说它们似乎比刀叉更有用）我从未见过有人第一次尝试筷子时这样觉得。筷子当然有优点，刀叉也一样。其中的爱情浪漫故事很奇怪，男主角穿越之前大约40岁，这些女孩相对来说太年轻了。怪怪的。
Nom Deme 2星

I'll have to knock stars off a potentially good novel due to the author's regular injections of propaganda.

由于作者经常注入私活，我将不得不给这部潜在的好小说差评。
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I'm sure many of those handing out five stars for this novel don't realize that almost all Chinese authors will inevitably inject their feelings of superiority of Communism and ethnicity over Western civilization. For race, Chinese authors tend to refer to the superiority of the "Hua" in their novels, which is referencing back to Chinese. Now, I didn't see author Er Mu glorify this often made point in his novel (to his credit), but you have to be blind to miss his frequent touting of Communism (in his novel this would be represented by "City Hall" and "the administration") over western political systems (represented by the "nobles" and "the Church").

我敢肯定，很多给这部小说打五星的人都没有意识到，几乎所有的中国作家都不可避免地会注入他们对共产主义和种族优于西方文明的感觉。对于种族，中国作家倾向于在小说中提及“华”的优越性，这是对汉语的回溯。现在，我没有看到作家二目在他的小说中经常提到这一点（值得称赞），但你必须盲目地跳过他经常吹捧共产主义（在他的小说中以“市政厅”为代表）对西方政治制度（以“贵族”和“教会”为代表）

And yet, most of the modern conveniences and developments he introduces as an Isekai traveler are developments originating from Western civilization--a fact I'm sure Er Mu conveniently ignores.

然而，他作为穿越者介绍的大多数现代便利和发展都是源自西方文明的发展——我敢肯定二目很容易忽略了这一事实。

It's fine if you disagree with this being an issue, but if you were to read more translated Chinese novels, you'll quickly see what I mean as these themes reoccur time and time again.

如果您不同意这是一个问题，那很好，但如果您要阅读更多翻译的中文小说，您会很快明白我的意思，因为这些主题一次又一次地重复出现。
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I'm sure if I wrote a fantasy novel where my main character ends up in China and has to go about replacing a corrupt, inept, and backward governing system that was Communism with a Western based political system it would be overwhelmingly thumbed down by Chinese readers.

我敢肯定，如果我写了一部奇幻小说，其中我的主角最终来到了中国，并且必须着手用西方政治制度取代。。。，它会被中国人读者压倒性地否定。
Speedar 5星

Great story with some nice character designs and vast, interesting world but it has some flaws. MC has so versatile knowledge and superior memory that it's sometimes too much (especially given his normal background, no preparation time and zero "superpowers", it's impossible for any mechanical engineer or any other engineer to accomplish something even remotely similar to what Roland did in such a short time and without painfully reinventing tons of little annoying things and prototyping).

很棒的故事，有一些不错的角色设计和广阔而有趣的世界，但也有一些缺陷。主角拥有如此多才多艺的知识和超强的记忆力，以至于有时太多了（尤其是考虑到他的正常背景，没有准备时间也没有“超能力”，任何机械工程师或任何其他工程师都不可能完成与主角所做的遥不可及的事情）在这么短的时间，没有痛苦地重新发明大量烦人的小东西和原型）。
（译者注：其实这个人说的也有道理，毕竟本质还是爽文，真的科研当然困难重重，不可能像小说里说的轻而易举）
Gareth 2星

I read a lot more of this book/web series than I should have considering that I never really jelled with it almost from the start. I think what kept me reading was the similarity between this and the Arch Magus series by Michaels Sisa. I don't know which series came out first (nor care really), but the main premise of both stories are eerily similar:

考虑到我几乎从一开始就从未真正接受过这本书，我阅读的这本书的内容比我应该读的要多得多。我认为让我一直阅读的是这本书与 Michaels Sisa 的 Arch Magus 系列之间的相似之处。我不知道哪个系列最先出现（也不在乎），但两个故事的主要前提都非常相似：
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An intelligent/powerful person from a different time/place is body swapped into a spoiled young nobleman who has been given charge of an out of the way town. The nobleman they have replaced is a horrible human being who was a sexual predator mixed with Prince Joffery from Game of Thrones. They are also the underdog in a competition to prove themselves so that they might one day be king. This person uses their advanced knowledge to turn this town into something much more than it has any right to be just in time to fend off a bigger conflict that is facing the kingdom as a whole.

一个来自不同时间/地点的聪明/强大的人被（穿越）换成了一个被宠坏的年轻贵族，他被任命到一个偏僻的小镇。他们取代的贵族是一个可怕的人类，他是一个性掠夺者，与权力的游戏中的乔佛里王子混在一起。他们也是竞争中的失败者，以证明自己，以便有朝一日他们可能成为国王。这个人利用他们先进的知识将这个小镇变成了比它有任何权利及时抵御整个王国面临的更大冲突的东西。

The biggest difference (regarding the overall premise) of course is that this series has witches in it, but honestly, it's not that much of a difference. The characters in the arch magus series are magical in nature and are given a massive boost from knowing the body swapped character, so it almost evens out here as well.

最大的不同（就整体前提而言）当然是这本书里有女巫，但老实说，差别不大。 Arch magus 系列中的角色本质上是神奇的，并且由于了解身体交换的角色而得到了巨大的提升，所以它几乎也在这里平衡了。

However, where these series really split from each other is in quality. I absolutely loved the Arch Magus series as it quickly gets you invested in the characters, the setting and the conflict. This book on the other hand does none of these things.

然而，这本书真正分开的地方在于质量。我非常喜欢 Arch Magus 系列，因为它很快让你投入到角色、场景和冲突中。另一方面，这本书没有做这些事情。

The main character is, strangely, the least developed of all the characters. We get some really quick back story on him in the first chapter, and then after that, we learn nothing more about this character. He never seems to miss his home, his family or his old friends, he doesn't question the journey he is on, and for all intents and purposes, his old life doesn't exist. We don't even get much character motivation for him other than simply wanting to do stuff because... why not?

奇怪的是，主角是所有角色中最不发达的。我们在第一章中得到了关于他的一些非常快速的背景故事，然后在那之后，我们对这个角色一无所知。他似乎从不思念他的家、他的家人或他的老朋友，他从不质疑他正在踏上的旅程，而且无论出于何种意图和目的，他的旧生活都不存在。除了想做点什么之外，小说甚至没有给他太多的性格动机，因为……为什么不呢？

The witches are a little more fleshed out, but not by much. They at least get backstories and motivations, but it's not nearly so much that you grow attached to any of them in the 200+ chapters that I read.

女巫角色略微丰满一些，但不是很多。他们至少得到了背景故事和动机，但在我阅读的 200 多章中，你对其中任何一个的依恋并没有那么多。

About the best thing I can say for this book is that the premise is really cool, but that brings us full circle back to the Arch Magus comparison as I think that is a far superior series.

关于这本书我能说的最好的一点是，设定真的很酷，但这让我们回到了 Arch Magus 的比较，因为我认为这是一个非常优秀的系列。

The final thing I want to note about this book is how creepy it is regarding how it sexualises minors. At first, I put this down to some translation issues (of which there were quite a few), but as the story progresses you start to realise that yes this older man is dressing up teenage girls in what is basically a slutty witch costume, and as the novel goes on the girls get younger. It never actually crosses a definitive line, but it was more than enough to make me continually grow more uncomfortable with every chapter, especially as the number of witches grew and their ages went down.

关于这本书，我要注意的最后一件事是，它对未成年人的成人化是多么令人毛骨悚然。起初，我把这归结为一些翻译问题（其中有不少），但随着故事的发展，你开始意识到，是的，这个年长的男人正在给十几岁的女孩打扮，基本上是放荡的女巫服装，而且随着小说的继续，女孩们变得越来越年轻。它实际上从未越过一条明确的界限，但这足以让我对每一章都感到越来越不舒服，尤其是随着女巫数量的增加和她们的年龄的下降。

So overall I don't see what the hype is about with this one, and I recommend trying other things instead. For people fascinated with the premise, then I recommend Legend of the Arch Magus, but for people who like the long web series format, I recommend He Who Fights Monsters by Shirtaloon, or Mother of Learning by Domagoj Kurmaic.

所以总的来说，我看不出这本书好在哪里，我建议大家尝试其他的东西。对喜欢这个设定的人，我推荐大魔法师的传说，但对于喜欢长篇网络系列小说的人，我推荐 Shirtaloon 的 He Who Fights Monsters 或 Domagoj Kurmaic 的学习之母。
Mayank rwal 4星

A traveler from a modern world gets transported to a medi fantasy world with a unique magic system (Isekai), the book is filled with intrigue, mystery, action, war, kingdom building and humor. One of the best Chinese Webnovel I have read, started strong but lost steam by the end.

一个来自现代世界的旅行者被传送到一个拥有独特魔法系统的中世纪幻想世界，这本书充满了阴谋、神秘、动作、战争、王国建设和幽默。我读过的最好的中文网络小说之一，开始很强劲，但到最后失去了动力。

It stands out among the Chinese series in having a magic flintlock plot, actual characterization, and a non-wuxia world-building. I liked it a lot and was hooked all the way to the last 100-200 chapters. The story became torturous to read in the end and took me over a few months and a lot of willpower to complete.

它在中国小说中脱颖而出，拥有神奇的燧发枪情节，真实的人物塑造和非武侠世界建设。我非常喜欢它，并且一直被最后 100-200 章迷住了。这个故事最后读起来很痛苦，花了我几个月的时间和很大的毅力来完成。

The book is worth diving into and would rate it as 5/5 for 90% of the content. The last 10% is not even worth reading.

这本书值得深入研究，90% 的内容将其评为 5/5。最后的 10% 甚至不值得一读。
（译者注：确实结尾有失水准）
Adam Morva 5星

This was a fun book with some flaws. For example, the main character keeps having giant instances of dumb luck after another. Every time he wants to make a technological advancement he happens to find a new witch with just the right power, when he needs to investigate a murder, he happens to find a witch with just the right power. The romance I also found somewhat annoying. The society the MC tries to build is a flawed socialist country.

这是一本有趣的书，但也有一些缺陷。例如，主角不断有巨大的愚蠢运气。每次他想要进行技术进步时，他都碰巧找到了一个拥有恰到好处的新女巫，当他需要调查一起谋杀案时，他碰巧找到了一个拥有恰到好处的女巫。我也觉得浪漫有点烦人。主角试图建立的社会是一个有缺陷的社会主义国家。

That being said, this novel is as good as Chinese novels get, and I enjoyed most of it.

话虽如此，这本小说和其他中国小说一样好，这是我最喜欢的一本。
Erwin 1星

The most boring read ever. 150 chapters in and the mc shows no interest in any of the woman. In fact you experience very little through the characters. It is very clinically told by a third person perspective.

有史以来最无聊的阅读。在 150 章中，主角对任何一个女人都没有兴趣。事实上，你对角色的体验很少。它是通过第三人称视角非常机械地讲述的。
dunwannalab 5星

Worth a read. The world building is in-depth and characters are fleshed out. However, sometimes I believe the issues and problems the characters face are too easily overcome such that they have not gone through difficult situations or lost much.

值得一读。世界观设定有趣，人物充实。但是，有时我认为角色面临的问题太容易克服，以至于他们没有经历过困难或失去太多。
Marcos 4星

A nice introduction to the world, more information about the magic system would definitely be appreciated but it is justifiable in universe. As light novels go it's very enjoyable, if you're new to the genre it's a good starting point in the fantasy subgenre.

一个很好的世界观，关于魔法系统的介绍非常有趣，但它在这个宇宙中是合理的、自洽的。随着轻小说的发展，它非常令人愉快，如果您是该类型的新手，那么它是幻想子类型的一个很好的起点。
Vijay 5星

Excellent character development. The book is worth the time.

优秀的角色成长。这本书值得花时间。
Kaushik Tari 5星

Best kingdom build novel
Loved it

最好的王国建设类小说。喜欢！
Manubayr7 4星

Pretty good, a nice read and especially the science is really interesting!

非常好，很好读，尤其是科学真的很有趣！
101st 3星

good start really enjoyed it but the ending was rushed

好的开始真的很享受，但结局很仓促
Jermz 5星

This is one of those webnovel series that you would never regret sacrificing your sleep, energy, and time for as it really has a very enjoyable plot, thoughtfully written characters, and a good mix of humor, romance, drama, and action. However, there were definitely some pieces of information that someone with a critical eye would be put off with, but if you just focus on the interactions of the characters and the world-building that this series brings, you would definitely appreciate this a lot.

这是你永远不会后悔牺牲睡眠、精力和时间的网络小说之一，因为它确实有一个非常令人愉快的情节，精心编写的角色，以及幽默、浪漫、戏剧和动作的完美结合。但是，肯定有一些信息会让有批判眼光的人望而却步，但如果你只关注角色的互动和这本书带来的世界建设，你肯定会非常感激。

The isekai hero is someone who's actually just a very ordinary guy who studies engineering. There's nothing exceptional about him apart from all the knowledge that he has, from being in a modern civilization, that can change the book's universe as the setting is in a medi age where the church hunts witches, treating them as demons. Nonetheless, the author still did a good job in providing him some fun interactions with the other characters in the book, giving us enough entertaining content. So contrary to what usually happens in most books, in this case, it is the side characters that are truly the highlight. I won't go much into detail about each of them as there's a lot. In a nutshell, the only flaw is probably how the main character was written but nonetheless, it doesn't diminish the overall quality of the series

主角实际上只是一个非常普通的学习工程学的人。除了他所拥有的所有知识之外，他并没有什么特别之处，因为他处于现代文明中，这可以改变本书的世界，因为背景是在中世纪，教堂猎杀女巫，将她们视为恶魔。尽管如此，作者还是很好地为他提供了与书中其他角色的一些有趣的互动，给了我们足够的娱乐内容。因此，与大多数书中通常发生的情况相反，在本书里真正的亮点是配角。我不会详细介绍她们中的每一个，因为她们有很多。简而言之，唯一的缺陷可能是主角的写作方式，但它并没有降低本书的整体质量

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